Anna Hopper Poet Triolet

A Moment With Jonah

Lying flat on our backs
Parallel to the sky
Both completely relaxed
Lying flat on our backs
Naming clouds that go by
Just sweet Jonah and I
Lying flat on our backs
Parallel to the sky

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Daniel Turner November 30, 2020 at 4:24 PM Isn't it great that regardless of age, anyone can still be a kid. Love this one, Anna! Hoping you and yours are well.

Mystic Rose Rose November 23, 2020 at 4:37 PM Sounds like a very pleasurable experience, thank you for sharing it, have a blessed day.

Jan Allison November 15, 2020 at 12:15 PM aww this is such a precious moment you describe Anna:-) hugs jan xx

Silent One November 15, 2020 at 11:51 AM Sounds lovely...