A Moment of Thought - Grab Your Partner Collaboration

A moment of thought we now share
Twisting itself around your heart
Into the future now I stare 
Dreaming of tomorrow's fresh start 

Don't know exactly what it is
A moment of thought we now share
Began when we had that first kiss
Showing me that you really care

Nothing in my soul says beware
No warnings of the heart felt pain
A moment of thought we now share
How long will fantasy remain

Where does it end, the path unknown
I reach out to you, you're not there
Only part of me have I shown 
A moment of thought we now share

Penned 31 January 2014
Contest : Collaboration between  Wayland Bunch and Seren Roberts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Loving Iii Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 3:55 PM
congrads in the contest serene!
Kendrick Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 6:38 PM
Way to go with this winning work..Congrats..Sara
Jerden Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 2:16 PM
Congratulations, Seren and Wayland. This form required a lot of communication, I'm sure, but it blends perfectly! Cheers, Roy
Sivey Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 6:43 AM
Wow, this is an incredible write my friend! You have written a fantastic collaboration...I can't tell where one poet ends and the other begins it's so seamlessly blended together! I surely enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 9:10 PM
Thank you Russell, will add both our names after the judging.
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