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A Moment Of Passion

I love you my darling with all my heart Wonder how many times that's been said At the moment of passion when love bursts forth Two hearts intertwine, passions fed That moment of bliss, the follow up kiss Is there anything else that compares With this overpowering lust and desire The sheer pleasure of that moment shared I'm feeling great passion rising within me As the words start to form on my screen Passionate love words describing my feelings As you emit tiny pleasurable screams If a Heaven exists, then this must be it Nothing has ever equaled this pleasure To bottle this feeling and sell it in stores Would guaranty success beyond measure I love you my darling with all my heart Wonder how many times that's been said At that moment of passion when love bursts forth Two hearts intertwine, passions fed

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Date: 2/2/2024 6:02:00 PM
Hello Jack, You take us on a heartfelt journey into the depths of love’s embrace. Your words capture the intensity and beauty of shared moments, igniting flames of passion within. It’s like diving into a sea of emotions, where every word resonates with pure devotion. Truly captivating! - Blessings, Daniel
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/2/2024 6:10:00 PM
An amazing journey of love! Thank you for the kind words Daniel my friend! Cheers
Date: 2/2/2024 2:34:00 PM
such a passionate and beautiful love poem, Jack! I especially liked these two lines: If a Heaven exists, then this must be it Nothing has ever equaled this pleasure...just well said words of love. Have a great weekend, Sara
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/2/2024 3:47:00 PM
"if a Heaven exists, then this must be it" "If a Heaven exists, then this must be it" Two special lines... thank you my love!!! So love hearing it Sara! xxx

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