A Moment of Freedom


The world finally
extricated itself 
from my thoughts
and became a sunlit park
being awakened by children
escaping from car seats 
to run unrestrained 
into the wide freedom
of a morning  - broke into
a sudden eruption 
of water from a sprinkler
coming to life 
in the far distance, 
seeding the warm air 
with mist.

I felt the easy float
of clouds in a blue sky,
the bounding joy 
of a retriever let off its lead
and the effortless hover
of seagulls tilting 
on the edge of a breeze.
For a moment
I had the strange desire 
to lift my arms, almost sure
in the belief
I could leave the ground.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Lane Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 12:56 PM
That's how I feel when a burden of worry has been lifted from me. Well written in your usual, easily related manner, Paul.
Willason Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 3:27 PM
Thankyou dear Lin for your kind words...pleased that the poem carried something familiar. Sorry for my delayed reply... Always good to receive that gentle calling card of yours...treasured. Take care, Paul
M  Avatar
January 28, 2025 at 2:09 AM
I was there and l felt and understood that wonderful sense of freedoom and elation Paul….you are a true wordsmith my friend! Debx
Willason Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 3:17 PM
Ah ! ...you say the nicest things my dear Deb....so much appreciated. Cheers my friend
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