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A Moment of Anguish

In the midst of many, here we are alone, vibrant and yet feeling a pang of regret, being unable to transmit bliss we own and though it makes sense to let go and forget, knowing we’re soul and not this mind-body clone, the fact we cannot share, makes us feel upset. Our dilemma is dark delusion of course, since guided by God, each soul charters its course.

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Deb M

Date: 9/23/2023 6:40:00 AM

Very Lovely U.S….Debx

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/23/2023 10:03:00 AM

Thank you, dear Deb

Ink Empress

Date: 9/23/2023 6:25:00 AM

Beautiful alliterations and flow of words, i love your rhymes and depth of every line you weave, in such eloquence. I especially felt the line “ the fact that we cannot share makes us feel upset” your poems always makes me ponder, and gives me the impression that you have a very spiritual and deep understanding of life and beyond! Always refreshing to read you. Keep shining

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/23/2023 10:03:00 AM

Thank you, dear IE, your comments are like a breath of fresh, elixirous air

Lin Lane

Date: 9/23/2023 5:41:00 AM

There is no brighter light to follow then the one we see when we accept His guidance. No more dark delusions. I love reading your work, Seeker... always curious to see where you'll use your trademark word, 'bliss.'

Lin Lane
Date: 9/23/2023 5:54:00 AM

I realized what you were doing a LONG time ago, but never mentioned it. I like that you do it well.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/23/2023 5:51:00 AM

Touché ~ you’ve got me, Lin! Yes indeed, bliss in permanence, a magnetic pulsation that renews like our breath 24x7. It may be alluded to but known only when imbibed and assimilated within, by grace of course.

Tom Woody

Date: 9/23/2023 5:27:00 AM

Alone in a world of 8 billion. And yet never alone if one has a relationship with the Creator

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/23/2023 5:32:00 AM

Yes. The relationship however needs to be illumined, otherwise it is a but a concept.