Unseeking Seeker Poet Ottava rima

A Moment of Anguish

In the midst of many, here we are alone,
vibrant and yet feeling a pang of regret,
being unable to transmit bliss we own
and though it makes sense to let go and forget,
knowing we’re soul and not this mind-body clone,
the fact we cannot share, makes us feel upset.
Our dilemma is dark delusion of course,
since guided by God, each soul charters its course.

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Deb M September 23, 2023 at 6:40 AM Very Lovely U.S….Debx Unseeking Seeker September 23, 2023 at 10:03 AM Thank you, dear Deb

Ink Empress September 23, 2023 at 6:25 AM Beautiful alliterations and flow of words, i love your rhymes and depth of every line you weave, in such eloquence. I especially felt the line “ the fact that we cannot share makes us feel upset” your poems always makes me ponder, and gives me the impression that you have a very spiritual and deep understanding of life and beyond! Always refreshing to read you. Keep shining Unseeking Seeker September 23, 2023 at 10:03 AM Thank you, dear IE, your comments are like a breath of fresh, elixirous air

Lin Lane September 23, 2023 at 5:41 AM There is no brighter light to follow then the one we see when we accept His guidance. No more dark delusions. I love reading your work, Seeker... always curious to see where you'll use your trademark word, 'bliss.' Lin Lane September 23, 2023 at 5:54 AM I realized what you were doing a LONG time ago, but never mentioned it. I like that you do it well. Unseeking Seeker September 23, 2023 at 5:51 AM Touché ~ you’ve got me, Lin! Yes indeed, bliss in permanence, a magnetic pulsation that renews like our breath 24x7. It may be alluded to but known only when imbibed and assimilated within, by grace of course.