A Moment Not of Mind

Encircled by shadows 
Drowning 
in ashes of a past 
Left gasping 

Grasping 
Hope 

Per chance to resurrect dreams 

A moment 

To envision 
The incision 
Which unbinds the heart 
From ego and mind 

Liberates desires 
Inspires 

Divine love 

Meant only for the soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 5:56 PM
A beautifully written poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 9:31 PM
Congrats on your win, Melanie. Well done.
George   Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 3:54 AM
Very deep! Much to ponder in this magnificent piece, Melanie. Sincerely, Elaine
Cox Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 6:18 AM
Thank you very much Elaine. I appreciate the read and you taking the time to respond:)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 10:15 PM
Fantastic penning Melanie :) Congratulations on your win!
Cox Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 6:19 AM
Thank you Maureen. Very kind response.
Godwin Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 4:10 PM
Lovely, like the delivery. Congrats on the contest win, very exciting. All the best ... CayCay
Thomas Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 1:26 PM
Melanie how very lovely this is. This is not just another love poem. Great write!
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