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A Moment Not of Mind

Encircled by shadows Drowning in ashes of a past Left gasping Grasping Hope Per chance to resurrect dreams A moment To envision The incision Which unbinds the heart From ego and mind Liberates desires Inspires Divine love Meant only for the soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/18/2018 5:56:00 PM
A beautifully written poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/7/2018 9:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Melanie. Well done.
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Date: 12/21/2017 3:54:00 AM
Very deep! Much to ponder in this magnificent piece, Melanie. Sincerely, Elaine
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Melanie Cox
Date: 12/23/2017 6:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Elaine. I appreciate the read and you taking the time to respond:)
Date: 12/20/2017 10:15:00 PM
Fantastic penning Melanie :) Congratulations on your win!
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Melanie Cox
Date: 12/23/2017 6:19:00 AM
Thank you Maureen. Very kind response.
Date: 12/20/2017 4:10:00 PM
Lovely, like the delivery. Congrats on the contest win, very exciting. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 12/18/2017 1:26:00 PM
Melanie how very lovely this is. This is not just another love poem. Great write!
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