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A Moment In Time

Hi. I have never done this form. I went by the syllable count and format, but realized I did not do it as a folklore theme. So, it is not fully accurate. I posted it anyway. I remember how you looked at me A time in the past, but now we’re here Like another life, in this moment to see Suddenly, there was not a thing to fear Music flowed so naturally, in sync Playing without practice, in a blink Yes, we found ourselves in every tune Only we, without applause ended too soon * This was a memory from long ago of special times writing some beautiful music, just the 2 of us. It was never played in front of others, which explains no applause. I was thinking how important it is to share creativity with others when it is created. Enjoy. Heidi Sands 6/20/22

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Date: 6/22/2022 1:35:00 AM
Thanks for this Heidi, splendid poetry.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/22/2022 11:46:00 AM
Thank you Harry :)
Date: 6/21/2022 8:21:00 AM
A creative/wonderful write. Music and poems go together. Maybe you can put them together. Have a blessed day with your music/writes...............
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2022 6:43:00 PM
I have a few posted lyrics with music on my page from quite a while ago. Thank you for your support Paula. I appreciate it very much :)
Date: 6/21/2022 4:29:00 AM
I hear the sound of music in this delightful memory recall. Much enjoyed the vibes of love you convey, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2022 5:50:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment Vijay. I always appreciate your support. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 6/20/2022 7:27:00 PM
'Form Schmorm!' I say. This is a delicate, heartfelt write, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/20/2022 8:43:00 PM
It must be too late at night after a long day. You lost me Gershon lol. Thank you for your kind comment. Goodnight :)
Date: 6/20/2022 6:27:00 PM
In tune both musically and otherwise, Wonderful write Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/20/2022 7:00:00 PM
Yes amazing synchronicity. Thank you Joseph. :)

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