A Moment In Chime

The little legs of my wind chimes
         dangle, and giggle a nervous tune
         each time a soft breeze tickles 
         the soles of their feet.
         And as a bluebird on a red tin roof
         looks on with indifference,
         for a moment I am 8 years old again.
         A time when time itself did not move
         and everything a simple and joyous wonder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gauthier Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 9:27 AM
What a 'feel good' poem, Charlie. It's a pleasure to find this delightful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
Knowlton Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 12:31 PM
Hello Line, and a belated thank you...For some reason PS no longer emails me when I get a comment.
Bangalee Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 12:16 AM
beautifully written...........
Knowlton Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 3:10 AM
Thank you Mahtab. I appreciate you reading and your response.
Marine Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 4:10 PM
Never lose that sense of childhood wonderment, Charlie- it brings out the kid in us too...love this!
Knowlton Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 3:12 AM
Didn`t notice your comment back when I wrote this Aqua. Thank you.
Allison Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 7:15 PM
Absolutely charming imagery Charlie:-) hugs jan xx
Knowlton Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 4:12 AM
Thanks Jan! For reading and enjoying.
Gauthier Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 9:03 PM
A FAVE. Clever title, a most charming write. Superbly done, Charlie.
Knowlton Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 5:03 AM
Thank you for reading and liking. I appreciate and value your opinions Line.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace