A Moment From My Bedroom Window
robin wearing an
orange skirt eating petals~
rain falls from above
flowers of flame tree fall on
ground creating a carpet
red vented bulbul
eating blackberries from tree~
dark grey clouds move fast
sun shines on clouds creating
a diamond in the sky
13.06.2021
Syllables count checked at PS syllables counter
Note: Tried to write a proper Tanka as per blog given by Brain Strand. If anyone notice a mistake,do drop a note.
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