A Moment From My Bedroom Window

robin wearing an orange skirt eating petals~ rain falls from above flowers of flame tree fall on ground creating a carpet
red vented bulbul eating blackberries from tree~ dark grey clouds move fast sun shines on clouds creating a diamond in the sky
13.06.2021 Syllables count checked at PS syllables counter Note: Tried to write a proper Tanka as per blog given by Brain Strand. If anyone notice a mistake,do drop a note.

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Date: 6/16/2021 6:55:00 AM
Rama, you have a very fertile, creative imagination - the slightest happening, the slightest sound, the most interesting person, animal or anything for that matter, triggers off poetic instincts and thoughts in us, which MUST go down on paper. Keep writing my friend. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/14/2021 12:52:00 PM
Two lovely Tanka, Rama. // Barry
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Date: 6/13/2021 11:37:00 PM
Cute scenes... Lovely imagery in your tankas... I enjoyed reading it...
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Date: 6/13/2021 4:59:00 PM
You have described precious moments in nature's endless scenery, Rama. Beautifully written! :D
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Date: 6/13/2021 3:01:00 PM
Isn't it wonderful how we can be so inspired by common everyday things. You just never know when it comes but then you have to write it down before you lose it forever. This I think was one of those times. Wonderful verse. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/13/2021 12:47:00 PM
two gorgeous scenes!!
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Date: 6/13/2021 12:14:00 PM
Hello Rama, these are beautiful bedroom secnes from your window. blessings my friend.
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