A Moment Between

a moment between even the leaves silence waiting for the glorious a loon calls goodbye

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Date: 10/15/2017 3:03:00 AM

You let the reader "hear" your words...an innate ability. :) john

Date: 9/1/2017 9:30:00 AM

There are rumblings from the wild geese, Victor

Date: 9/1/2017 9:12:00 AM

Hi Patricia , 115 days to happy Christmas , great write my friend ::)))) hugs

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/1/2017 6:26:00 PM

;;;;)))) hugs

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/1/2017 9:25:00 AM

HAPPY CHRISTMAS NIALL. Never to soon to say it. lol

Date: 9/1/2017 6:23:00 AM

a thats all folk momet ... tickle tickle ...

Pipping Stars
Date: 9/3/2017 9:26:00 AM

uhm ...

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/1/2017 9:26:00 AM

High Timothy are you an elf?

Date: 9/1/2017 2:01:00 AM

Another top notch haiku

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/1/2017 2:05:00 AM

Some things I believe only need a few words to paint a mural. Thanks again.

Date: 9/1/2017 12:55:00 AM

Love this :)

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/1/2017 1:06:00 AM

Thanks Maureen, means a lot to me.