A Moment

The day is oh so quiet.
The sun has not come up.
But I can see it peeking.
The world awaits it on its throne.
Everything is still.
No one is running about.
What a perfect time for poetry…
Before my brood is up.
Beautiful. Serene.
A cup of coffee near by.
A moment out of time.
Within this cocooned moment…
The world is all mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 11/15/2014 12:42:00 PM
Wow yes awesome! CONGRATS! That's exactly the time i get to take to poetry, i adore n relate to how u say when 'our brood isn't up' yeah as mother hens we get only some time for poetry eh. Dis was creative! Hey i just found out my plcin in child fables,! Warmest regards. Fond Thanku.
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Date: 11/10/2014 6:58:00 AM
In this piece you cherish Peace and Tranquillity, lovely. Nicely done.
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Date: 11/9/2014 4:21:00 PM
you painted such a peaceful picture Carol many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/9/2013 11:34:00 AM
Carol , nothing I love more than embracing mornings with beautiful words and imagery. Congratulations love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 10/3/2013 9:52:00 PM
Excellent, Carol. Great write. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 10/2/2013 9:43:00 PM
CAROL, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "Morning Due <--not DEW! Contest. SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL- Thanks for the awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "The Letter". Enjoy my latest blog! "Daybreak" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15983&PoetID=18720 **LINDA**
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Date: 10/8/2011 2:48:00 PM
Congrats Carol on a dynamic win with this wonderful write for the competition.luv..
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Date: 10/8/2011 11:57:00 AM
I enjoyed your lovely poem Caro. Keep sowing and I'll keep reading. Smile. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/14/2011 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations Carol on your wonderful poem winning in the contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 6/29/2011 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations Carol on your win in the "Any First Year Poem on PS" contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:47:00 PM
so happy to see you in the winners circle congrats on your fine win my friend cory
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Date: 6/28/2011 2:58:00 PM
Congrats Carol on another amazing win in Brian's contest with these excellent words of Free Verse luv..
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Date: 5/26/2011 7:53:00 AM
this sounds like a great start to a wonderful day nicely done .cory
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Date: 5/25/2011 9:22:00 AM
I like this very much.This sounds just like the way I start off my day.Thanks for your comment on my poem.''A daughters' Truth''.Have a great overcasting day....
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