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A Moment

A Moment The strangest things fill your head Of stars and moonbeams that drive the soul The way the sun shines upon the water I know of these things, through you Because of you, in your eyes A world hidden, yet shared Future and past drift by as clouds A beginning is formed in a moment shared

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Date: 11/13/2018 4:29:00 AM
Thoughtful lines. I like the poem. It reminds me of an old friend Jesus Maria ciganda. Your style makes me remember Lorca. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 11/20/2010 6:56:00 PM
strong write
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Date: 11/19/2010 6:43:00 PM
Sounds like an eccentric bastard! Just kidding! Sounds like you are two peas in a pod!
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Date: 11/17/2010 12:37:00 PM
Like the last line. True sharing of the self is so important in a relationship as your work so gracefully states.....Sara
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Date: 11/17/2010 12:30:00 PM
a beautiful and lovely write,,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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