A Mole On Upper Lip-H

Dress up now boy and girl, It’s time for bonfire joy
Bring your purse bring smile line up now for fun
Many costumes many shades walking in the haze
Sounds of drumming and of horn fletching reborn.

Kids wander in the dark, go from house to house
And the adults partying the night away somewhere
A girl extended her hand; we took a walk on the lake
Saw an old house not lived in for many years.

We had it all the house, nothing could stop us now
A whisper went around a small town, tummy round
The girl searched for who gifted her with a child.
As we were all in masks and outrageous costumes

I could detect her because of a mole on upper lip,
Love story goes on, my son to step into my shoes.

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Honorable Mention in
Contest: Love Story sponsored by frank herrera
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Davis Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 10:43 PM
Dr. Ram What an interesting and creative love story. Very unique and captivating. Thank you for the wonderful comment on my Path Of Hate poem.
Brockenbrough Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 6:48 AM
That's deep a little scary a lil freaky
Nandy Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on your HM for love story contest. This one's a little spooky rather mysterious , the reader could be confused questioning : are they stories? or a story? I liked it , leaves you guessing. Regards, Rinki
Baalu Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 6:52 AM
Dr Mehta I really liked this poem --a flow in it -rhythm in it,. yes the truth of life cycle ..."my son to step into my shoes" ('m reading one by one I am new here) Krishna Baalu
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 11:11 AM
Congratulations on your winning write in Frank's Love Story Contest Dr.Ram. Love,Carol
Onclaud Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 9:38 AM
a winsome offering that truly deserves a citation, dr ram.. special congrats with a bang!
Sweetheart Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 5:52 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your HM in the Love Story contest with this brilliant and wonderful write and win today.. enjoy another special honor all your own my friend with lots of luv... happy festivities..
Falotico Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 5:04 AM
Thought this was one of the best I read my friend...Congrats on your success in contest...Michael
Mannan Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 4:55 AM
Many congratulations Dr. mehta for this super win.
Loving Iii Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 6:22 PM
DO NOT ADMIT TO THIS BEING TRUE! john
K. Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 7:54 AM
oh wow-- this was sure unexpected, but I really enjoyed your love story, Dr. Ram! Wow, how very interesting :) I wish you the best in Frank's contest :)-- Happy Halloween :)-- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 9:59 AM
Hey, is this TRUE story of how you met your love (for Frank's contest), Dr.Ram? IT's so halloweenish! And not what I'd expect of you. Sounds like it was very spur of the moment!! Do tell! Luv, Andrea
Babcock Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 11:36 AM
This is a cute love story. Good luck on the contest. God Bless Phyl
Neels Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 10:46 AM
A love story with a twist Dr. Ram ;) love it, all the best for the contest ~ Wilma
Docherty Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 8:27 AM
Beautifully written love the little twists within that keep the poems story going and full of surprises... Thanks for your welcome views and thoughts on my writng today!
Falotico Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Beautifuly wriiten my fine poet friend
M V Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 7:21 AM
Fine,dear mehta.Great presentation.Mole is a good identity.fabiyas
Campi Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 5:34 AM
Even though I am confused, I enjoyed reading your work here. I am at a lost for words on this one, as it is filled with mystery.
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 4:18 AM
Interesting story in this one, Dr. Ram...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Horsman Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 11:55 PM
excellent rendering here, enjoyed this Dr Ram. Harry
Mossburg Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:40 PM
This is a clever tale. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Thanks, too, for your kind words to me. Steve
Johnson Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 1:37 PM
Interesting tale. Thank you for my 6th place win in your contest. I enjoyed trying out the new to me form, Kyrielle. Thank you. Joyce
Culverhouse Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 11:48 AM
good write... interesting story!! I like the twist ending! You are talented. I am glad you got my cassanova poem.
R Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 9:25 AM
soupmail:)
R Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 9:25 AM
A really interesting story you have penned here, Dr. Ram. Really enjoyed reading this and loved your last two lines. Wonderful entry for Frank's contest! Hugs, Emilia
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