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A Modern Song

I see heaps of rotten garbage with flies and mosquitoes, I hear noisy sexy songs, I smell stinking odour, I eat latrine- worms, I touch broken rusty machines, I think of profusely urinating on basils, lifting a leg like a dog and I tear sunflowers to pieces.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/12/2014 8:08:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Mandal- I choose your first good written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mandal Bijoy Beg
Date: 2/12/2014 8:49:00 AM

Thanks Anne! Best wishes!

Skat A

Date: 2/12/2014 7:05:00 AM

Mandal, wow... This is cool, and so expressive. , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/18/2014 8:42:00 PM

I am in laughter how you are a new poet, and already block have me. Shame on you. Is this the kind of spirit you have. I don't understand, I don't know who you are, nor do I want to anymore. Do you really think you have the right to judge others, before getting to know them. Oh is it the name, or cause someone sent you. Have a nice life, I will block you too as well. As a reminder, not to come near your work. I will have others block you too. Let's see how you like getting blocked by poets you've done nothing to

Mandal Bijoy Beg
Date: 2/12/2014 8:51:00 AM

Greetings, Skat! Best wishes!