A Mockingbird's Serenade

Sometimes when hearts are separated by a distance cast upon them by life’s fate, their words sing out across the azure sky like distant songbirds looking for a mate. And like these birds that sing love from afar, I send to you my thoughts along the breeze; poetic thoughts that shine like ev’ning star, and whisper lilts of love through forest trees. The poetry of love wraps round my heart as thoughts of you waft softly through my mind, and form poetic words, love to impart, like songs of birds for mate they hope to find. And like the serenade of mockingbirds, forever I will woo you with my words.
November 11, 2019
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Roper Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 11:16 PM
Congratulations on your win in John Hamilton, Best Sonnet Contest. Hugs Eve
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January 3, 2020 at 4:38 AM
Thank you, Eve, I appreciate it. Hugs, John
Hamilton Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 1:19 PM
A wonderful sonnet John, congrats on a shared second place best sonnet 2019!
Gondolf Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 2:57 PM
Thanks, John, I appreciate it. Happy new year. John
Chiri Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 9:45 AM
Talk about me doing sensual so well... well John you give romantic a new name! I love this!;) sigh!;)
Gondolf Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 9:48 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Bren, I'm glad you liked it. Yes, I am a hopeless romantic. :) Hugs, John
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November 16, 2019 at 5:47 AM
You are a hopeless romantic John my friend -your poem is really cool enjoyed every verse especially the third verse , such creative work my friend, and not even for a contest, in which for sure you would get a first placing. Have saved it as a fav. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 16, 2019 at 7:18 AM
Guilty as charged...thank you so much, Jenn, I appreciate you and your thoughts. I did write this for a contest - fall in love with a sonnet. I hope the sponsor likes it as much as you. Hugs, John
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November 13, 2019 at 7:50 PM
"forever I will woo you with my words" So sweet and romantic. Moments touch in the calling of the wind, and hearts can collide- even from so far away. This is so beautiful my dear friend. I shall place in my favorites, to read again and again. :) Brandy
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November 13, 2019 at 8:38 PM
Words when placed properly will convey the emotions of the heart no matter how near or far you may be. Thank you for your thoughts my sweet friend and thank you for the fav. Hugs, John
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November 13, 2019 at 4:32 AM
This is beautiful John! Love it :-) x
Gondolf Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 8:43 AM
Thank you so much, Elaine, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hope all is well in your world. Hugs, John
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 11:56 AM
as romantic as it is beautiful John...wonderfully penned Sonnet... love this :) hugs
Gondolf Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 12:46 PM
Thank you so much, Sandy, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, John
Roper Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 11:45 AM
Love the stanza; I send to you my thoughts along the breeze; poetic thoughts that shine like ev’ning star, and whisper thoughts of love through forest trees. Beautiful sonnet.
Gondolf Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 12:43 PM
Thank you, Eve, I appreciate your kind words and visit. Hugs, John
Scars Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 8:21 AM
oh my! beautiful! Loved every romantic word dear John...lovely poem as always. x:-)-luloo
Gondolf Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 8:29 AM
Thank for so much, Luloo I’m glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you and your kind words. All the best my sweet friend. Hugs, John
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