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October. 14- 2024
Let us Minichu on Fulfillment Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Mohan Chutani

 

A Minichu on Fulfillment

Syllables: 6,12,3 4,8,2 2,4,1 6,8,1
for fulfilment, we cry. it is a wild mirage we chase, but never get, though we try. desire all time, though quite hard it is to beget, it’s prime. dream big. you need not fret. hug! for fulfilment we cry though quite hard it is to beget hug!
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Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 8:17 PM
You did well with this difficult form. Good luck on the contest
Rodgers Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 11:25 AM
Dear Valsa, Your words are so well expressed, and yes, welcome back. I agree with you that the human condition constantly seeks fulfillment. You poetically show its challenges while encouraging perseverance. Yes, fulfillment is mostly found in the simple pleasures of life. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Narain Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 10:57 AM
Welcome back. nice poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 5:15 AM
Dream big and hug. It really is the smaller moments, the one’s broken down, the one’s that get us through!
DiMino Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 4:11 AM
For sure, a good hug can sometimes do more than a world of medicine. Brilliant write!
Williams Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 2:36 AM
All the best for the contest Valsa, looks a tricky form to write but have connected the verses well so they sound profound and right. Hugs Maria
Cunningham Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 12:10 AM
You rose well to the challenge Valsa, looks a tricky form to write. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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