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A mind without temptation

A fragile mind Is a prosperous mind It has a delicate structure Pure as possible loyal as it is noble It puts bravery before cowardness No temptation can seize its existence Forever more shall it succeed Many have not known of its capabilities For it has created many knowledgeable people To limitless warriors Leaders who do not prowl there quarters hidden But join there soldiers on the battlefield Instead of giving opinions It has written facts This mind is natural Pursuing thoughts of mixed feelings Strength it obtains its clueless to For this mind is not just at the top of the hill But at the lowest it has weaknesses to For its love and care can be taken advantage By even the ones that are close For even its heart is delicate

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Date: 8/29/2011 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations Robert on your fine poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 4:27:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Robert. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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