A Million-Dollar Dream

One dollar buys a million dollar dream.
Lotteries excite thoughts of esteem.
One day I bought a ticket,
My angst began to fidget.
Until I screamed; then went to redeem!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Taylor Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 8:39 PM
Congrats, Dane Ann. Excellent. Nice going. luv Ralph
Merryman Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 3:34 PM
Congrats on your win, Dane-Ann! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 11:44 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 8:00 AM
Dane Ann congrats on your win..David
Bunton Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 6:45 AM
Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 4:33 PM
Hi, Dane Ann. It's always nice to run across your work from seeing a contest since I so rarely visit the lists of poems by members. Congrats on this one. LUv, Andrea
Scholtz Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 2:54 PM
Congratulations on your win. Elizabeth
Sweetheart Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 1:00 PM
congrats Dane Ann on a sweet success for this lottery Limerick.. hope all is well...
Squyres Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 6:59 AM
Ohhhh You Won...love it !!! Smiling !!! Witty Limerick !!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 12:01 PM
LOL I thought I really won when I read this! LOL I hope I do place somewhere in the winner's circle. I am so glad you liked it. Big Smiles.
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 5:24 AM
:) :) well done Dane Ann. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 12:01 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise for reading and enjoying my poetry. It is very encouraging to me. Big Smiles.
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