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Date written: 08/02/2025

A Mighty Wind - hiku

                       
pale sun in the sky                                                     
                                                     u
                           i                      o     t ~
                              n              e
umbrella turned           s       d
                                       i
angry wind b   l   o   w   i   n   g
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Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 11:15 AM
Really good ku, Edward. Congrats
Ibeh Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:31 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-)
Manassian Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 1:12 AM
Great write. Loved the content and form.
Ibeh Avatar
August 3, 2025 at 5:41 AM
Thank you very much, Eileen:-)
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