Andrea Dietrich Poet Ottava rima

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One of naughtiest songs ever on the radio. Listen if you dare! by Nine Inch Nails

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-HbKaHddmfU

Wish I knew how to grab pics of myself from the 90's and put the picture of me and Joe on our Harley we used to have!!!

 

 

A Midlife Fantasy

Performing at a karaoke place,
he strode to the stage, such a mammal; oh!
That song he sang! Its words I can't erase:
" I want to f*ck you like an animal."
A pervert he and everything that's base,
yet strangely, I was feeling flammable.
He ambled off onto his girlfriend's arms.
I wondered her impression of his charms.

Then later at a concert i would spy
right smack in front of me and my own mate,
the buck against his girlfriend was that guy
behind her pressed.I watched them undulate,
like having sex, but dressed, and they can't wait!
A yearning suddenly came over me.
That night a strange boy was my fantasy.

(Stanza one is Ottava Rima while Stanza 2 is Rhyme Royal.)
True story from one of the few times I attended a long-ago motorcycle rally with hubbie. Posted 4/6/17  John Lawless' GO AHEAD....I DARE YA!!!Contest

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Robert Johnson May 1, 2017 at 10:58 PM Even James Taylor got raunchy once. :) In Steam Roller Blues.

Debbie Duncan April 24, 2017 at 9:52 PM This is a good write. I went to youtube and listened. I like the beat to it. The word is a little. But The weeknd uses words like that too. But I still like him He sounds like Michael Jackson The Weeknd Starboy (official) ft. Daft Punk OR I feel It Coming :)

John Michaels April 9, 2017 at 12:33 PM The "Go Ahead... I Dare Ya!!" contest seems the ideal forum to air this risky / risque poem!! Well-written and gives an *interesting* peek into an alternative lifestyle!! Good luck with the contest, Andrea!

Casarah Nance April 7, 2017 at 9:13 PM Oh that song brings back memories, thanks for the flashbacks through a pockefull of poetry. hugs x

Bruce Adams April 7, 2017 at 4:31 PM Women are always attracted to the " Tough Guy ". A well written poem and useful insight for us single guys ! Good luck in the contest Andrea.

Pashang Salehi April 7, 2017 at 1:18 PM I have never read this style (Ottava Rima), thanks for the lesson.

Russell Sivey April 7, 2017 at 6:36 AM Intriguing write my friend! I enjoyed reading this sexy poem! Just stopping by for a quick read of poets who are on the new poems list. I'm still in school but now am on class number 6 in my Masters program for my Poetry Degree. I will be getting into my poetry classes soon, looking so forward to doing that! See you later!!

Eileen Manassian April 7, 2017 at 4:51 AM That's something else, dear. Sometimes what's crass gets one going! ;) We are strange creatures, indeed.

Agnes Krampe April 6, 2017 at 7:40 PM THIS one should do well in the contest. Wild times :)

Kim Rodrigues April 6, 2017 at 7:03 PM Excellent write! 7