A Metaphor

“Only in his hometown and in his own household is a prophet without honor.” Matthew 13:57

Sometimes, when I go shopping, I meet a strange woman.
Barefoot, 
dressed only in a garland of dried flowers and an old sheet stained with bird droppings, 
with last year’s nest on the head and ecstatic glint in the eyes,
she gets up on the pallet of tinned peas
and makes a speech.
I wonder who she is.
Another one crazy goddess of Walmart?
An older Ophelia the shepherds saved and smuggled oversea to the States?
Or, maybe, she is an anthropomorphic metaphor for the knowledge obscure to mere mortals?
She seems to be upset that people can't figure out a word she says.
I understand your feelings, metaphor:
even a small knowledge seems great to the ignorant; 
the great knowledge seems to them madness.


08.11.2019
Last Year's Nests Poetry Contest
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Date: 11/10/2019 4:52:00 PM
Hello Kurt. Richard Lamoureux's Wal-Mart poem brought me here, or perhaps the crazy thoughts one hears all the time; ah, maybe that's just me. I love your poem. The divine and time will tell who is truly crazy. Thanks Kurt.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 11/11/2019 7:58:00 AM
I think, no one is wrong and no one is right. Thanks for reading, Jeff)
Date: 11/10/2019 1:07:00 PM
Who was madder --- The Fool or King Lear? Who is more absurd --- this lady or us? … Who is President? --- Trump or Twitter?! Smiles, Gershon
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 11/10/2019 2:27:00 PM
The world is Walnut)
Date: 11/10/2019 10:22:00 AM
You inspired me to write a poem about Walmart.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 11/10/2019 2:23:00 PM
Goood :3
Date: 11/10/2019 8:15:00 AM
This brought a smile, it made me feel like i have a birds eye view into her psyche and into the limitations of my own.
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Date: 11/10/2019 2:23:00 PM
I usually avoid crazy people cause I'm a bit nut too and I like solitude)
Date: 11/9/2019 9:03:00 AM
...in the land of the blind the one-eyed man is king.....
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 11/10/2019 6:21:00 AM
two-eyed is god) Thanks John.
Date: 11/8/2019 7:59:00 PM
that is deep, Kurt. I love where you took the theme, right into her hair!! Love it.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 11/10/2019 6:15:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I love your comments)
Date: 11/8/2019 1:28:00 PM
- I've seen a photo from Walmart ... and I didn't believe my own eyes ... crazy world !!! - Good luck in the contest, Kurt - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2019 1:37:00 PM
Thank you, A.L.)
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