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.A MESSAGE . Walking on the beach when the sand blew in my eye tears began to fall as I started to cry. As I was wipeing my tears away I heard a voice and a man would say. He said hey little girl don't be sad it's us your mom and dad. The voice I heard was my only clue so I looked over my shoulder to see if it was true. They were both standing there right behind me seeing them both together was hard to believe. We came to deliver a message to you use your head and think before you do. Stay here with me please don't go they said remember this"take life slow". Teresa Skyles 10/2/11

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Date: 4/22/2012 8:03:00 AM
A beautiful poem to read. I loved it!
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Date: 4/8/2012 11:21:00 PM
A powerfully emotive write here Teresa,, i am concerned to hear of your current situation; and extend my prayers and good wishes to your Husband, may God bless you mightily is my response at this news..) yours in poetry Joe.."
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Date: 3/5/2012 6:39:00 PM
Yes some good advice there Teresa..)
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Date: 12/15/2011 4:31:00 PM
An interesting write.
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Date: 10/5/2011 8:31:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Teresa. Love, Carol
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