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A mess

A mess of my thoughts Empty in good intentions To betray me always

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/26/2024 7:49:00 PM
Sometimes the best creations are made when thoughts are messy. :) Continue to scribble outside the lines, Milton. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy
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Milton Batchelor
Date: 3/27/2024 2:05:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughts. I always enjoy writing haikus cause you can only use 17 syllables and there a challenge. It's like telling a painter paint me a picture but you only get 20 strokes.

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