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A Mermaid Named Pam

A Mermaid Named Pam Out at sea, a poor mermaid named Pam- far away from her neighborhood swam; richer waters she'd try to attract a new guy on a pirate ship planning a scam. 'Cause big treasure she needed to find her life hadn't been any too kind- she was missing a fin and some scales on her skin- but a pirate with patch is half-blind! Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Pirate-Themed Limerick Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Judged: 04/16/2019
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Allison Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 6:14 PM
sure made me smile Sandra, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 4:56 PM
Certainly, a fun one to write, Jan! Thanks for your uplifting comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
April 18, 2019 at 9:38 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful Limerick win,Sandra, full of great humor. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 4:57 PM
Thanks so much, Eve! Had fun with this one. Thanks for the happy Easter which we spent with our daughter's family. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 6:55 PM
I remember this cute one. GREAT win for a great poem. Congrats
Haight Avatar
April 22, 2019 at 4:58 PM
Thanks, Andrea! Had fun with this one! Hugs, Sandra
Gorelick Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 12:55 PM
Cute, congrats! BG
Haight Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 4:16 PM
Thank you so much, Barbara! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 12:00 PM
Haha..Congrats on your win Sandra..
Haight Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 4:16 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph! Much appreciated. Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 8:18 AM
Very cute, Sandra! Congratulations on first place!
Haight Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 4:16 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Kitchin Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 5:00 AM
Sandra, I loved this and it gave me a belly laugh! Congratulations on your first place win with this gem!
Haight Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 4:15 PM
I enjoyed writing for your contest, Tania! Thanks for the nice placement and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
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April 12, 2019 at 7:11 PM
Hello Sandra … really enjoyed this limerick of yours. It gives hope for all of us - Thanks - Lindsay
Haight Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 4:15 PM
Thank you so much, Lindsay! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 5:40 PM
what a CUTE ending on this couplet of limericks, Sandra. Also, thanks so much for your kind words at CArolyn's blog!
Haight Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 4:14 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Ashley Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 4:54 PM
Aww, your limerick is so sweetly delightful, Sandra. I completely enjoyed your amusing and clever poem. Fantastic last line! I sure hope Pam gets her man, err, pirate ;) Best wishes for a win, my lovely friend.. ~Susan
Haight Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 4:14 PM
Thank you so much, Susan! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Rose  Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 4:12 PM
WE ARE ALL MISSING SOMETHING OR OTHER. SWEET TENDER WRITE Sandra, gl in the contest
Haight Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 4:13 PM
Thank you so much, Pixie! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
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April 11, 2019 at 2:47 PM
Hey, maybe that's what I'm doing wrong. I need to find a man who has trouble seeing. LOL Very funny limerick, Sandra. Wishing you success in Tania's contest! Also sending a Soup mail next. Hugs, Carolyn
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April 17, 2019 at 4:07 PM
Ha Ha! Thanks so much, Carolyn! Hugs, Sandra
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