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A Mermaid

There once was a girl who was a maid Her wish her beauty shall never fade. She feared to climb the tree And refused to swim in sea. At night she saw herself a mermaid. May 17th, 2018

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Harshita Chaudhary

Date: 8/18/2018 9:02:00 AM

So...... beautiful, lovely words :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/22/2018 11:26:00 AM

Thank you so much for your visit and lovely feedback. Humbled! Be blessed.

Silent One

Date: 6/1/2018 8:12:00 AM

Nice to see you trying a limerick and you did it very well..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/1/2018 8:49:00 AM

Thank you so much Silent One! My pleasure. An acknowledgement I do appreciate and treasure. Stay safe.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/30/2018 5:38:00 PM

Another lovely write. You possess a poetic heart.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/30/2018 6:06:00 PM

Only a heart of a poet can feel and imagine words. I can't thank you enough for bringing joy and light to my words. Stay blessed.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/20/2018 6:22:00 AM

She was dreamer..a fun read Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/20/2018 6:35:00 AM

A dream is a puff of hope! Your visits and appreciations are always my delight dear Vijay. Shine and stay blessed.