A Mermaid

There once was a girl who was a maid
Her wish her beauty shall never fade.
She feared to climb the tree
And refused to swim in sea.
At night she saw herself a mermaid.

May 17th,  2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Chaudhary Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 9:02 AM
So...... beautiful, lovely words :)
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and lovely feedback. Humbled! Be blessed.
One Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 8:12 AM
Nice to see you trying a limerick and you did it very well..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Thank you so much Silent One! My pleasure. An acknowledgement I do appreciate and treasure. Stay safe.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Another lovely write. You possess a poetic heart.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 6:06 PM
Only a heart of a poet can feel and imagine words. I can't thank you enough for bringing joy and light to my words. Stay blessed.
Pandit Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 6:22 AM
She was dreamer..a fun read Besma.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 6:35 AM
A dream is a puff of hope! Your visits and appreciations are always my delight dear Vijay. Shine and stay blessed.
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