A Mere Coincidence?

I was put on this planet
with a mission to accomplish,
and enthusiasm is my reason to exist;
I take nothing in stride... 
not keeping watch on my enemy,
and try to live peacefully...
knowing that I will die
without a grudge on my sigh!   

Is that a mere coincidence
that I follow in the footsteps
of the few who lived for peace and liberty,
and rejected glory for modesty?
Mockery wasn't a cause
for their dire or distress...
to dissuade them from anything 
they had said; there was no wall dividing words
from action,to distort their meaning, 
because they were loud and clear!

I dont simulate or imitate the monarch,  
and please the well-to-do
who dress lavishly and have a lot:
my living is a simple song...
a harmony with a beautiful sound;
I show pity, and I'm never cruel!  

They stare at me, as if I weren't stately...
only cursed with stark poverty;
I don't deny my hunger...a hunger
for different values that stand fast:
I am guided by the starlight,never stagger
or fail to take my stand!
I'm realistic and defined by grace...
to imagine it a mere coincidence:  
to have come into existence,
and not fit in any social system
which demands to honor its hypocritical anthem!

Copyright 2008 by Andrew Crisci

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 3/13/2010 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured peom this week. Ernilando
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Congratulations on being featured this week.. Constance
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Date: 3/12/2010 12:03:00 AM
Top write Andrew! this one really had the muse going over various scandals of society as I pondered your words... Well done on this deserved piece being featured this week, keep penning, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 3/11/2010 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Andrew~ My friend Congratulations on your featured poem much deserved! Laura :)
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Date: 3/9/2010 8:16:00 AM
Andrew, this is really good. For some reason, I went to a "bourgeoisie/proletariat" mindset, like the lower class is better because we don't do the bad things that the upper class does, and yet we get called out on the small things.
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Date: 3/8/2010 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Andrew. Love, Carol
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enjoyed, congrats on the featured poem!!
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Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Congrats on your feature poem this week Andrew and for for recent contest successes.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/7/2010 7:54:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your featured poem on the Soup this week.. a great choice to share..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/7/2010 6:06:00 PM
Much for the reader to ponder about in this poem. My living is simple too. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 3/7/2010 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew, on your feature this week. I enjoyed the fantasy comparisons and the "...ivory castle...) Smiles, Dane Ann
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