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A Memory

When stars are hidden from view And hazy clouds hang in the night I remember a lover I knew An ethereal beauty of sunlight Days were pure with laughter's guise With imaginary dreams, we'd mine Surreal the moment, we dropped our disguise To share a trancelike fervor so divine Our flowering hearts we'd claim From the shadowy garden, we desired This dreamlike world turned to molten flame An unreal realm, where our souls conspired 5/27/21

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Date: 6/3/2021 1:03:00 PM
Frederic - Congratulations on your win - beautifully written - David
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Date: 6/3/2021 7:55:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your win. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3
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Date: 6/2/2021 3:05:00 PM
Frederic, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge and I like the music video and also congratulations on receiving POTD, peace - Constance
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/3/2021 1:23:00 PM
thank you Constance for your kindness
Date: 6/2/2021 11:58:00 AM
Lovely. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/31/2021 12:22:00 PM
Very lovely poem! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/31/2021 7:51:00 AM
Beautiful, Frederic. Such a wonderful addition to add these romantic guitar song to accompany. Congrats on POTD and thank you for sharing ~
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Date: 5/30/2021 2:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honor! An outstanding romantic poem! Blessings and hugs dearest, Gina!
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Date: 5/30/2021 12:56:00 AM
Congrats for your POTD
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Date: 5/29/2021 9:47:00 PM
What a beautiful poem Frederic! You made all those words fit perfectly! Congrats on scoring a POTD!
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Date: 5/29/2021 6:14:00 PM
Congratulations, Frederic, on your POTD. A beautifully flowing, touching poem with the required words - not an easy task! Best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 5/29/2021 6:01:00 PM
In that dreamlike state, moments and memories seem to caress the heart. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Frederic, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 5/29/2021 2:58:00 PM
Ah, a conspiracy of souls in romance. Wonderfully done Frederic. Nice use of the prompt words. Congratulations on your POTD. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 5/29/2021 9:00:00 AM
What a beautiful poem. Very thought-provoking. Congratulations! 1
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/29/2021 9:26:00 AM
thank you Ann
Date: 5/29/2021 8:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful story/write. Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/29/2021 9:27:00 AM
thank you Paula
Date: 5/29/2021 8:31:00 AM
You did well Fredric. These dont come easy and take work. And your reward was a well deserved POTD. GLWTC. - Ken
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/29/2021 9:28:00 AM
yes these words took some time, thank you Ken
Date: 5/29/2021 8:08:00 AM
Congrats on POTD. Love this. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/29/2021 9:28:00 AM
thank you Regina
Date: 5/29/2021 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations for your POTD Frederic. Well done! :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/29/2021 9:29:00 AM
Hedi my poetic friend thank you for your kindness
Date: 5/29/2021 7:00:00 AM
WoW! Charlie, You used the chosen words to write a lovely romantic write. Well done.Best wishes in the contest. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/29/2021 9:32:00 AM
my name is Frederic, thank you Alexis
Date: 5/29/2021 6:18:00 AM
Beautiful romantic verse, Frederic, congratulations on POTD. Good luck in Constance contest. Hugs Eve
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/29/2021 9:32:00 AM
thank you Eve for your kindness
Date: 5/29/2021 5:50:00 AM
Beautifully written, Frederic! Congrats on POTD! Blessings, Kim M
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/29/2021 5:55:00 AM
Thank you Kim for your kindness
Date: 5/29/2021 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations! Enjoy the honour
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/29/2021 5:56:00 AM
Thank you Rama
Date: 5/29/2021 5:10:00 AM
Very nicely done, Congrats on POTD
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/29/2021 9:31:00 AM
thank you Joseph
Date: 5/29/2021 5:06:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Frederic!
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Date: 5/29/2021 2:24:00 AM
Happy memories of long ago, we all have them. Congrats on your POTD Frederic, enjoy the honour. Tom
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/29/2021 9:30:00 AM
yes we do Tom, thank you

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