A Melting Morning

It snowed heavily in Ireland for the past month and just last week the thaw set in 
and I wrote this poem.......




After the thaw
birds swim the sky
exuberant
warmed by a light drizzle 
falling on pear coloured fields
they drink in a saturated land




Gliding from cedar to spruce
great canopies of army green,
the gulls alight from a satin sky
to branches covered in lichen
where pistachio ivy clings




Sweeping over a shrouded sea
liquorice birds blot the view.
as blackbirds gather
on the arching limbs
of a ivory silver birch
rejoicing
in a melting morning
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Taylor Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 9:13 AM
This is such a lovely piece with beautiful imagery. Please keep up the excellent work
Ruebel Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 3:27 PM
Oh Eiken, This is simply lovely! I am so glad I read your wonderful poetry today. As Always, Shar
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January 3, 2011 at 2:53 PM
beautiful scene!
Green Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 7:01 AM
Love your descriptive way of writing. Can picture the scene. Beautiful .. Jackie Green
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January 3, 2011 at 6:53 AM
Beautiful images shine through your poetry...so enjoyed....Michael
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