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A Melting Morning

It snowed heavily in Ireland for the past month and just last week the thaw set in and I wrote this poem....... After the thaw birds swim the sky exuberant warmed by a light drizzle falling on pear coloured fields they drink in a saturated land Gliding from cedar to spruce great canopies of army green, the gulls alight from a satin sky to branches covered in lichen where pistachio ivy clings Sweeping over a shrouded sea liquorice birds blot the view. as blackbirds gather on the arching limbs of a ivory silver birch rejoicing in a melting morning

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Date: 1/13/2011 9:13:00 AM
This is such a lovely piece with beautiful imagery. Please keep up the excellent work
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Date: 1/3/2011 3:27:00 PM
Oh Eiken, This is simply lovely! I am so glad I read your wonderful poetry today. As Always, Shar
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Date: 1/3/2011 2:53:00 PM
beautiful scene!
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Date: 1/3/2011 7:01:00 AM
Love your descriptive way of writing. Can picture the scene. Beautiful .. Jackie Green
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Date: 1/3/2011 6:53:00 AM
Beautiful images shine through your poetry...so enjoyed....Michael
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