A Meeting of the Eyes

at first glance a spark instantly ignites
their eyes meet like kissing lips;
a glorious spell cast


Date written: 07/28/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Roper Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 7:16 PM
To be young again, a spell I miss.. Very good verse, Edward... thank you for your visit... I 've grown very lazy. Blessings my friend. Love your book.
Ibeh Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 1:18 AM
Thank you very much, Eve:-)
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 1:35 PM
ahhh, romantic! (thanks for the win in your last contest, edward)
Ibeh Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea:-)
George Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 5:11 AM
The waves of emotion the first glance creates are beautifully captured . Short and sweet, dear Edward !
Ibeh Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 11:22 AM
Thank you very much, Valsa:-)
Mcintosh Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 2:44 PM
So amazing... like the meeting, your writing is hypnotic - God bless you friend. Love, Gina
Ibeh Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 2:54 PM
Thank you very much, Regina:-)
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 12:25 PM
- Romantic and beautiful, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 12:46 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
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