A Me and a You

this night i was robbed
of a me and a you
taken clean off the shelf
where i kept them both
to remain forever.

such simple things,
mes and yous,
made of cotton hearts
and button eyes
and trained to say i
love you with sincerity.

and though, this night,
i was robbed of such treasure
(that me and that you)
i can still appreciate
the beauty of rebirth as

i reach for my needle
and thread to sew on 
a stitched smile and
those button eyes and
those cotton hearts.
i implant those 
i love yous with sincerity
(just as a me would say it)

i may have been robbed of
a me and a you
but they've been lost before.
i've always appreciated
simple homemade things
(especially mes and yous).
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Heck Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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November 29, 2008 at 8:18 PM
Stephenie - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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November 19, 2008 at 3:55 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 8:02 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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October 5, 2008 at 6:26 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured. This is an excellent poem. I like the flow of the words and the descriptiveness embedded therein. The message is beautiful. Great job! ~Joseph
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2008 at 6:34 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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October 1, 2008 at 10:47 PM
Hi Stephenie, great free verse here. I read it with great interest. Honestly speaking it touched my heart. Very sincere write dear. Congratulations too. Love, chitra
Mason Avatar
September 24, 2008 at 11:18 AM
This is a very clever write with lots of ways to read the words ... smile ... great writing Stephenie and a well-deserved selection as a feature this week!! Congratulations.
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September 24, 2008 at 5:53 AM
"A Me And A You" is featured. Congratulations Stephenie. God Bless. Vince
Winter Avatar
September 22, 2008 at 5:22 AM
Congratulations Stephanie on your featured poem of the week. Interesting and creative write. Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
September 21, 2008 at 7:20 PM
Very well written - Never know whats really up - Some folk are just different I reckon - God Bless
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September 21, 2008 at 4:43 PM
This is a creative poem with interesting imagery. Congratulations on having it featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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