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A Me and a You

this night i was robbed of a me and a you taken clean off the shelf where i kept them both to remain forever. such simple things, mes and yous, made of cotton hearts and button eyes and trained to say i love you with sincerity. and though, this night, i was robbed of such treasure (that me and that you) i can still appreciate the beauty of rebirth as i reach for my needle and thread to sew on a stitched smile and those button eyes and those cotton hearts. i implant those i love yous with sincerity (just as a me would say it) i may have been robbed of a me and a you but they've been lost before. i've always appreciated simple homemade things (especially mes and yous).

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Date: 12/3/2008 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/29/2008 8:18:00 PM
Stephenie - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/19/2008 3:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:02:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/5/2008 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured. This is an excellent poem. I like the flow of the words and the descriptiveness embedded therein. The message is beautiful. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/4/2008 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2008 10:47:00 PM
Hi Stephenie, great free verse here. I read it with great interest. Honestly speaking it touched my heart. Very sincere write dear. Congratulations too. Love, chitra
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Date: 9/24/2008 11:18:00 AM
This is a very clever write with lots of ways to read the words ... smile ... great writing Stephenie and a well-deserved selection as a feature this week!! Congratulations.
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Date: 9/24/2008 5:53:00 AM
"A Me And A You" is featured. Congratulations Stephenie. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 9/22/2008 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations Stephanie on your featured poem of the week. Interesting and creative write. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/21/2008 7:20:00 PM
Very well written - Never know whats really up - Some folk are just different I reckon - God Bless
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Date: 9/21/2008 4:43:00 PM
This is a creative poem with interesting imagery. Congratulations on having it featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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