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A Marvelous Spring Day

On a marvelous day like today While the sun is shining brightly, Everything seems to go my way On a marvelous day like today. The perfect time to while away An afternoon walk, so sprightly, On a marvelous day like today While the sun is shining brightly. Written April 4, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/5/2022 10:40:00 AM

upbeat and positive! Makes me want to skip

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/5/2022 11:10:00 AM

That's exactly how I felt when I was writing it.

Valsa George

Date: 4/4/2022 10:14:00 PM

It sounds a perfect day....A fantastic triolet, Milton !

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/5/2022 7:59:00 AM

Thank you so much, Valsa. I appreciated your read and your thoughts.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2022 5:26:00 PM

Oh all this time I thought they were new for you. Somebody was saying they should try them a few weeks ago, and I must have gotten you confused as the person who said that. Sorry about that!!No wonder you are so good with them

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/4/2022 7:24:00 PM

But, I never learned how to pronounce it. Is it "tree-o-let" or "try-o-let?" I call them the latter, but I suspect, in French, it would be the former. Oh, well....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2022 3:46:00 PM

wow, you are REALLY into these triolets. Keep it up. You are doing awesomely. And thanks for the foolish heart contest!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/4/2022 4:09:00 PM

(chuckling) I find them so easy, Andrea. I've been writing them for a long, long time. You're welcome for the contest.