L Milton Hankins Poet Triolet

A Marvelous Spring Day

On a marvelous day like today
While the sun is shining brightly,
Everything seems to go my way
On a marvelous day like today.
The perfect time to while away
An afternoon walk, so sprightly,
On a marvelous day like today
While the sun is shining brightly.

Written April 4, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger April 5, 2022 at 10:40 AM upbeat and positive! Makes me want to skip L Milton Hankins April 5, 2022 at 11:10 AM That's exactly how I felt when I was writing it.

Valsa George April 4, 2022 at 10:14 PM It sounds a perfect day....A fantastic triolet, Milton ! L Milton Hankins April 5, 2022 at 7:59 AM Thank you so much, Valsa. I appreciated your read and your thoughts.

Andrea Dietrich April 4, 2022 at 5:26 PM Oh all this time I thought they were new for you. Somebody was saying they should try them a few weeks ago, and I must have gotten you confused as the person who said that. Sorry about that!!No wonder you are so good with them L Milton Hankins April 4, 2022 at 7:24 PM But, I never learned how to pronounce it. Is it "tree-o-let" or "try-o-let?" I call them the latter, but I suspect, in French, it would be the former. Oh, well....

Andrea Dietrich April 4, 2022 at 3:46 PM wow, you are REALLY into these triolets. Keep it up. You are doing awesomely. And thanks for the foolish heart contest! L Milton Hankins April 4, 2022 at 4:09 PM (chuckling) I find them so easy, Andrea. I've been writing them for a long, long time. You're welcome for the contest.