A Marvelous Creation

Is a dream really a dream, or is it not as it seems? Is a fantasy just a majesty of colored day beams? To be in the shadows always brought forth trepidation, but I opened my eyes to a whole new marvelous creation. When I saw the beauty of my castle in the twilit sky, my heart became weak and I didn’t know why. I saw the glory of a world I had never known, but it instantly felt like an unrealistic true home. To feel the day dream of a reverie I hold dear, gave me a sense of comfort I shall always hold near. Surrounded by emerald fields and azure clouded skies, freed me from redemption and opened up my eyes. I see fairies and hummingbirds float all around the land, as I watch a Monarch butterfly sit on my right hand. This is no make-believe world or a dream from slumber, nor is it a place for extreme lightning or thunder. It’s a Shangri-La of idealism with stunning views, carrying breathtaking colors of pink and yellow hues. A bridge made of gold with a rainbow above, a castle full of nobility, dignity and true love. This grandeur palace reveals sweet luminescence, carrying a whole new divinity and shining essence. Radiant sparkles of blazing meteor showers at night, and in the dawn lays dew drops only seen in the light. In Winter, snow-capped pine trees do grow, and in the Spring there’s a crystal clear river that glows. I never knew I could live in a castle full of such fascination, but I opened my eyes to a whole new marvelous creation. Building Castles In The Sky December 20, 2016
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Date: 1/4/2017 6:27:00 PM
Lovely poem, Laura. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:14:00 PM
Congrats well done x
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Date: 1/4/2017 9:36:00 AM
Such a lovely piece! Congrats on your placement in the contest too. Carole Duet
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Date: 1/4/2017 7:58:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:30:00 AM
This castle is picturesque and full of pictures. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 1/3/2017 9:56:00 PM
Beautiful descriptions, Laura. I wish I had a castle like this. Congratulations on your win. A 7 & a fav.
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Date: 1/3/2017 4:36:00 PM
Great imagery Laura! Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed this! :-)
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