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A Man's Desire

There once was a sweet little lass from Eire Who had everything a man could desire A mustache she wore And biceps galore With bass voice like that of the town crier Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/23/2011 1:53:00 PM

ha! so funny. i'll check my list. if you arent' one of my favorite poets already, you are now!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/22/2011 10:14:00 AM

Hmmm...but for Ireland and the mustache, I'd think you were describing me. My voice is so deep and my biceps are bigger than many men's. Got a great chuckle from this. In my grade school choir they made me sing with the boys. Argh!! Love, Carol

Judy Ball

Date: 7/20/2011 5:24:00 PM

hmmmm Guess she did hae everything a man could desire. lol Good one my friend. Reminds me of something I heard someone say once. He said: "How lovely her hair grew half way down her back. Too bad some didn't grow on her head." Gret job here. God Bless, JB

Jack Horne

Date: 7/19/2011 12:21:00 PM

LOL, sounds like my ex : ) Thanks for a good chuckle, Bob

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 7/19/2011 11:13:00 AM

sweet little ass....says it all from word go ! Many thanks for commenting on my work. Alls well at my end. Was away on vaction in between. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/19/2011 9:41:00 AM

you had me rolling on the floor, robert! what a gag; i like lots! :) huggs, nette

Roxanna Johnson

Date: 7/19/2011 8:40:00 AM

Great write, I really enjoyed(:

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2011 7:51:00 AM

So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading today of the seasoned poets and the new poets. I am happy I was able to read your poetry today Bob. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol

Don Johnson

Date: 7/19/2011 12:13:00 AM

hehe Bob! watch out for the shirt lifters mate, cos they might try to educate, your palate :) lovely confusin verse hey. like my verse bout Lake Elisa....blue round the jowls, Joe loved her anyway... really enjoyed this new offering! keep pumping the ships sinking:) on ya, Don