Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Limerick

A Man's Desire

There once was a sweet little lass from Eire

     Who had everything a man could desire

          A mustache she wore

               And biceps galore

                    With bass voice like that of the town crier

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Black Eyed Susan July 23, 2011 at 1:53 PM ha! so funny. i'll check my list. if you arent' one of my favorite poets already, you are now!

Carolyn Devonshire July 22, 2011 at 10:14 AM Hmmm...but for Ireland and the mustache, I'd think you were describing me. My voice is so deep and my biceps are bigger than many men's. Got a great chuckle from this. In my grade school choir they made me sing with the boys. Argh!! Love, Carol

Judy Ball July 20, 2011 at 5:24 PM hmmmm Guess she did hae everything a man could desire. lol Good one my friend. Reminds me of something I heard someone say once. He said: "How lovely her hair grew half way down her back. Too bad some didn't grow on her head." Gret job here. God Bless, JB

Jack Horne July 19, 2011 at 12:21 PM LOL, sounds like my ex : ) Thanks for a good chuckle, Bob

Dr Hitendra Mehta July 19, 2011 at 11:13 AM sweet little ass....says it all from word go ! Many thanks for commenting on my work. Alls well at my end. Was away on vaction in between. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Nette Onclaud July 19, 2011 at 9:41 AM you had me rolling on the floor, robert! what a gag; i like lots! :) huggs, nette

Roxanna Johnson July 19, 2011 at 8:40 AM Great write, I really enjoyed(:

Carol Sunshine Brown July 19, 2011 at 7:51 AM So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading today of the seasoned poets and the new poets. I am happy I was able to read your poetry today Bob. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol

Don Johnson July 19, 2011 at 12:13 AM hehe Bob! watch out for the shirt lifters mate, cos they might try to educate, your palate :) lovely confusin verse hey. like my verse bout Lake Elisa....blue round the jowls, Joe loved her anyway... really enjoyed this new offering! keep pumping the ships sinking:) on ya, Don

Andrea Dietrich July 18, 2011 at 9:39 PM hahaha, this is great fun . Everything a man could desire "on himself" haha

Juanita Warden July 18, 2011 at 6:42 PM Very funny..descriptive...your desire?...:)..hugs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 18, 2011 at 6:29 PM haha another funny one Bob.. and a great visual too.. luv that title..oh so cool..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta July 18, 2011 at 5:44 PM Nice funny character sketch, Bob