A Man On the Train

Today I saw a man on the train,
he looked concerned, his face was strained,
As if his mind was miles away,
and I wondered what he'd done today.
Did he spend the day at a hospital
where his loving wife is frail and ill?
Is he a big shot CPA
who lost a million dollars today?
Perhaps he's a surgeon, who although he tried
to save a life, the young boy died.
Did he escort his only daughter to college
hoping she'll fill her head with knowledge?
Did he just murder his lady friend
who told him today their affair must end?
I saw myself on the train today
Amused at how my mind does stray!

6/23/09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 29, 2009 at 11:53 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Charlene. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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June 27, 2009 at 1:54 PM
Clever write Cherlene>>James
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June 24, 2009 at 9:17 AM
I prefer poetry that has a non-forced rhyme. I've traveled back to the mid-west on trains an' amused myself watchin' folks. Ms. Swift, you've captured the sorta thoughts that are entertained as one watches the other travelers. Well Done! A great story. JW ~ TexasCowboyIsh
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