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A Man On the Train

Today I saw a man on the train, he looked concerned, his face was strained, As if his mind was miles away, and I wondered what he'd done today. Did he spend the day at a hospital where his loving wife is frail and ill? Is he a big shot CPA who lost a million dollars today? Perhaps he's a surgeon, who although he tried to save a life, the young boy died. Did he escort his only daughter to college hoping she'll fill her head with knowledge? Did he just murder his lady friend who told him today their affair must end? I saw myself on the train today Amused at how my mind does stray! 6/23/09

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Date: 6/29/2009 11:53:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Charlene. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2009 1:54:00 PM
Clever write Cherlene>>James
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Date: 6/24/2009 9:17:00 AM
I prefer poetry that has a non-forced rhyme. I've traveled back to the mid-west on trains an' amused myself watchin' folks. Ms. Swift, you've captured the sorta thoughts that are entertained as one watches the other travelers. Well Done! A great story. JW ~ TexasCowboyIsh
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