Franco Gonza Poet Rispetto

A Man In the Rain

Cinnamon whiff dives on my sill

and raps a music of wind chimes.

Pearly the rain, trickling, until

she drapes the windowpane. Air 
mimes

the balmy drift frosting twilight,

a magic to be shared. I might

just wake you now, then—
dream by

while tip-taps croon a lullaby.
Dated 11/16/2013

Fragrance of Rain hosted by 
Nette Onclaud

From Franco Gonza

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 25, 2013 at 9:15 PM Fantastic imagery and form, Franco! Love the last line...congrats!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick November 23, 2013 at 4:06 PM Exciting winning work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Congrats..Sara

Shadow Hamilton November 20, 2013 at 8:10 AM hi Franco congrats on fine win Shadow x smile hug

Poet Destroyer A November 19, 2013 at 9:36 PM Franco, , Congratulations on your beautiful FRAGRANCE OF RAIN poem... Hugs ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2013 at 8:32 PM wow, Franco, you have the gift of poetry. Amazing imagery and writing in form. Congrats.

Dr.Ram Mehta November 19, 2013 at 8:58 AM Congratulations on the win, Franco

Charmaine Chircop November 18, 2013 at 2:40 PM An excellent poem Franco..So glad i stopped by

Poet Destroyer A November 17, 2013 at 12:54 AM Franco, deep and sweet in a way and sound.... xox~ LINDA

Nette Onclaud November 16, 2013 at 7:34 PM thank you, franco...:) huggs

Barbara Gorelick November 16, 2013 at 9:46 AM Smiling! " your manhood slain" is a wonderful phrase. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta November 16, 2013 at 8:50 AM Beautiful take with a wonderful form rispetto, Frank

Carly Lalion November 16, 2013 at 4:22 AM Reminds me of Gene Kelly's "Singing in the Rain" and I just feel your manly joy. Such a melodious piece wonderfully designed!