Edward Ibeh Poet Fibonacci

A Man In Ruins

a
man, 
broken,
he's saddled
with vices galore;
alcohol and gambling,
gargantuan monsters of ruin that do not sleep.
he's addicted to both; always falls back to the bottom rung ladder of sobriety


Writing Challenge - R words - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Constance La France 
Theme of choice: Ruin 
Syllables checked at HMS
Date written: 04/05/2023:

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Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2023 at 12:24 PM - Congratulations on your first place in the contest, Edward - Beautifully written - hugs Edward Ibeh April 8, 2023 at 5:03 AM Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)

Linda Alice Fowler April 7, 2023 at 7:47 AM Indeed alcoholism is a 'ruin'. Nice write Edward. Congratulations on your win! :) Edward Ibeh April 7, 2023 at 10:37 AM Thank you very much, Linda:-)

Constance La France April 6, 2023 at 8:15 PM Edward, outstanding writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Edward Ibeh April 6, 2023 at 8:59 PM Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, Constance:-) Most appreciated.

Sotto Poet April 6, 2023 at 8:09 PM Unable to quit pondering on this insightful poem; your thoughts are profound and uplifting. Congratulations on your podium win. Edward Ibeh April 6, 2023 at 8:58 PM Thank you very much, Lasaad:-)

Christuraj Alex April 6, 2023 at 8:05 PM A very beautiful picture of ruin. Congratulations! Edward Ibeh April 6, 2023 at 8:58 PM Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)