Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

A Male Goddess

When trying to write more silly stuff
Looked in the mirror standing in the buff
Swooned till unconscious
At this stunning male goddess
Pretending what I see is an illusion is tough

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Lim'Rik Flats December 15, 2017 at 2:57 PM Only have time for one today//Sun is shining, gotta go play//Nah, couldn't get bars//to hang on your stars//try tomorrow again I will, eh? GOOD AFTEREVE JACKSON OF THE REFLECTED STAR!!! Jack Ellison December 15, 2017 at 4:37 PM Must be frustrating... was it like that last year??? Don't remember you having this problem... sucks the big one eh!!! Don't forget the sunscreen!!! GOOD EVENING SIR JOHN JOHN!!!

Judith S December 15, 2017 at 11:28 AM So fun ... Oh mirror mirror upon my wall// Tell me who's male goddess of them all// Why it's YOU dear sir// You've caused quite the stir// And the ladies at your feet will fall :) Jack Ellison December 15, 2017 at 12:13 PM WOWSERS.............. a Lady Lim Queen!!! So damn proud dear JUDITH!!! Lovsies, Jacko xxx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 15, 2017 at 9:44 AM I wish you soft landing Pops :) much love! xomo Jack Ellison December 15, 2017 at 12:07 PM Love on it's back from Newmarket to Ottawa Miss Mo!!! xxx

Silent One December 15, 2017 at 8:45 AM Awww.... I am sure you are a male goddess at heart.... Jack Ellison December 15, 2017 at 12:06 PM Absolutely... there're doing a feature article on me in Woman's Weekly!!! Watch for it... I'm wearing a bikini!