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I dreamed a dream of a magical place, it was an enchanted forest dark green; oh, a sweet butterfly just kissed my face, and brilliant wildflowers sway and dance with grace, a fish jumps in a pond leaving no trace, I love my dream of a forest serene. I dreamed a dream of a magical place; it was an enchanted forest dark green. I love my dream of a forest serene, and within the trees waits my childhood horse; last time I saw Razzle I was sixteen, I let go of all that's happened between, and embrace with love this unfolding scene, my sweet horse is soft and in places coarse. I love my dream of a forest serene; and within the trees waits my childhood horse. My sweet horse is soft and in places coarse, and we are soaring in and out of trees; I am letting go of all my remorse, and music is playing from some far source, I stand in a meadow with a wind force, and weeping sad tears I fall to my knees. My sweet horse is soft and in places coarse; and we are soaring in and out of trees. ___________________________________ February 17, 2019 Poetry/Intertwining Rhyme/A Magical Dream Copyright Protected, ID 19-1115-783-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, I Dreamed A Dream sponsor, Silent One First Place

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Date: 1/19/2020 4:12:00 AM
beautiful poem penned; dreamy writing
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Date: 1/19/2020 9:28:00 AM
Mahtab, thanks for visiting with the beautiful!
Date: 2/21/2019 5:57:00 AM
Very beautiful, Constance...Congratulations on your 1st place win!
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Date: 2/21/2019 8:45:00 AM
Charlie, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and congratulations !
Date: 2/21/2019 5:39:00 AM
This is so beautiful! A poem about a loved friend in a place where he and you will only know the friendship and love you had together, where there is no separation of years, or of space. I love the interwoven rhymes! Thank you for your piece, and congratulations on the win!
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Date: 2/21/2019 8:47:00 AM
Andrew, thank you for visiting with that beautiful comment and congratulations. When Razzle died, I died a thousand deaths. I only find him in memories, dreams and in this poem.
Date: 2/21/2019 2:46:00 AM
- Freud looked at dreams as the gateway to the unconscious :) - Congratulations on your winning poem, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dear Heart
Date: 2/21/2019 8:48:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and hugs. Yes I have heard this before, sometimes I find my dreams are very disjointed, if that makes sense ~
Date: 2/20/2019 5:11:00 PM
I have read your dream and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Dear Heart
Date: 2/20/2019 5:17:00 PM
Sara, thanks for visiting with the congrats , appreciate ~
Date: 2/20/2019 2:04:00 PM
Wow... now thas an enchating dream... vivid imagery in your words Constance.... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Dear Heart
Date: 2/20/2019 5:18:00 PM
Silent, thanks for the contest and my placement, as you can tell I loved that theme ~
Date: 2/18/2019 8:02:00 AM
Enchantingly magical and beautiful. Lovely poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/20/2019 5:19:00 PM
ML, thanks for visiting with that beautiful comment, love it!
Date: 2/18/2019 6:16:00 AM
What an enchanting magical place, and what a sweetheart of a horse! I feel like I am there, and loving it so much. (And I am usually terrified of horses as I have fallen off of two of them at two separate times).
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Dear Heart
Date: 2/20/2019 5:20:00 PM
Caren, thanks for visiting my poem with that lovely comment, yes horses can be dangerous ~
Date: 2/17/2019 11:37:00 PM
My childhood horse was named Shantith (not real, just fantasy) can not remember why now, but your poem put a spell on me, simply ethereal!
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Dear Heart
Date: 2/18/2019 3:20:00 AM
Michelle, thanks for that wonderful comment, isn't that horse image beautiful? I love that I put a spell on you ~