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A Magical Dream

I dreamed a dream of a magical place, it was an enchanted forest dark green; oh, a sweet butterfly just kissed my face, and brilliant wildflowers sway and dance with grace, a fish jumps in a pond leaving no trace, I love my dream of a forest serene. I dreamed a dream of a magical place; it was an enchanted forest dark green. I love my dream of a forest serene, and within the trees waits my childhood horse; last time I saw Razzle I was sixteen, I let go of all that's happened between, and embrace with love this unfolding scene, my sweet horse is soft and in places coarse. I love my dream of a forest serene; and within the trees waits my childhood horse. My sweet horse is soft and in places coarse, and we are soaring in and out of trees; I am letting go of all my remorse, and music is playing from some far source, I stand in a meadow with a wind force, and weeping sad tears I fall to my knees. My sweet horse is soft and in places coarse; and we are soaring in and out of trees. ___________________________________ February 17, 2019 Poetry/Intertwining Rhyme/A Magical Dream Copyright Protected, ID 19-1115-783-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, I Dreamed A Dream sponsor, Silent One First Place
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Bangalee Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 4:12 AM
beautiful poem penned; dreamy writing
La France Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 9:28 AM
Mahtab, thanks for visiting with the beautiful!
Messina Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 5:57 AM
Very beautiful, Constance...Congratulations on your 1st place win!
La France Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 8:45 AM
Charlie, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and congratulations !
Fairchild Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 5:39 AM
This is so beautiful! A poem about a loved friend in a place where he and you will only know the friendship and love you had together, where there is no separation of years, or of space. I love the interwoven rhymes! Thank you for your piece, and congratulations on the win!
La France Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Andrew, thank you for visiting with that beautiful comment and congratulations. When Razzle died, I died a thousand deaths. I only find him in memories, dreams and in this poem.
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February 21, 2019 at 2:46 AM
- Freud looked at dreams as the gateway to the unconscious :) - Congratulations on your winning poem, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 8:48 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and hugs. Yes I have heard this before, sometimes I find my dreams are very disjointed, if that makes sense ~
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 5:11 PM
I have read your dream and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
La France Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 5:17 PM
Sara, thanks for visiting with the congrats , appreciate ~
One Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 2:04 PM
Wow... now thas an enchating dream... vivid imagery in your words Constance.... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
La France Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 5:18 PM
Silent, thanks for the contest and my placement, as you can tell I loved that theme ~
Kiser Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Enchantingly magical and beautiful. Lovely poem. Good luck in the contest.
La France Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 5:19 PM
ML, thanks for visiting with that beautiful comment, love it!
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February 18, 2019 at 6:16 AM
What an enchanting magical place, and what a sweetheart of a horse! I feel like I am there, and loving it so much. (And I am usually terrified of horses as I have fallen off of two of them at two separate times).
La France Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 5:20 PM
Caren, thanks for visiting my poem with that lovely comment, yes horses can be dangerous ~
Faulkner Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 11:37 PM
My childhood horse was named Shantith (not real, just fantasy) can not remember why now, but your poem put a spell on me, simply ethereal!
La France Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 3:20 AM
Michelle, thanks for that wonderful comment, isn't that horse image beautiful? I love that I put a spell on you ~
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