A Magic Trance

Fragmented fantasies collect yet fail to spark passion's flame. And painful shadows of regret morph into nightmares, seeking blame. He chose to leave, deaf to your plea: something your heart did not expect. For, blind to your reality, forever was hard to accept. Sifting through the ashes of hate, love falls victim to phantom fears. And innocence bemoans its fate; amidst anguish and silent tears. Blue velvet skies and gilded lies: attract a lonely, tortured soul. Yet when fantasies end, love dies: and broken hearts, levy a toll. Yet, hope evokes a magic trance, whereas past mistakes are erased. And granting love another chance, yesterday's players get replaced.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 1:21 PM
Thank God for hope. Well done, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 5:22 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 2:20 AM
Wow awesome rhyme scheme here, musing beautifully poetic. A sweet surprise happy ending. Worded swell throughout. Kudos poet. And thanxx
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 9:29 AM
Thanks so much, your comments are appreciated, Emile.
Salehi Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 6:13 PM
Your midnight fears make silent tears... I'll cry for you when daylight appears..
Pinet Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 9:29 AM
Thanks Pashang, your visit is appreciated, Emile.
Sands Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 2:18 PM
Very well written Emile :)
Pinet Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 2:27 PM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support, Emile.
White Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 1:20 PM
It must be very painful, a love that is slowly dying, even though there are hard feelings there. But hope is there in the end, it sounds like it.
Pinet Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 2:27 PM
Thank you very much Darren, I appreciate your visit, Emile.
Wanter Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 12:12 PM
Enjoyed this very much.
Pinet Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Thank you very much Sunlite, I appreciate your visit, Emile.
Shines Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 11:49 AM
very beautifully written!! i really enjoyed reading your poem.have a great day!!ehv
Pinet Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 12:18 PM
Thanks Kenisha, I appreciate your support, Emile.
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