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A Lullaby

The full moon rises.
the still water swirls and swells. 
Night's rhapsody sung. 




Written: August 28, 2021

Favorite Nature Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Sam Kauffman

January 7, 2022 at 10:27 AM

And a beautiful "rhapsody" indeed Lasaad. What a lovely picture you have created in this simple haiku! Congratulations on your win. Blessings of serenity to you as we begin this new year.

Valsa George

January 7, 2022 at 12:57 AM

Beautiful Haiku ! Congratulations on your win !

Craig Bowden

January 6, 2022 at 11:45 PM

Full of imagery this one. Congrats on your win.

Constance La France

September 8, 2021 at 8:52 PM

Lasaad, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku Contest with your Haiku, well done ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance

Sotto Poet

September 9, 2021 at 5:06 AM

Thank you so much, dearest friend Constance. I appreciate your reading and placing my poem.

Andrea Dietrich

September 5, 2021 at 8:26 PM

beatuful Ku for a beautiful picture!

Heidi Sands

September 3, 2021 at 3:41 PM

Congratulations for your beautiful win :)

Sam Kauffman

September 3, 2021 at 12:35 PM

Truly a rhaposody in serene images Lasaad. It is a peaceful painting of the serene. Congratulations on your win! Blessings of moonlit waters to you!

L Milton Hankins

September 3, 2021 at 11:21 AM

This is beautiful, Lasaad. So happy to see your haiku placing in the contest.

Delice Arleen Skelly

August 29, 2021 at 9:03 AM

Nice haiku, a lovely rhapsody..Delice

Kathy Bahr

August 29, 2021 at 6:50 AM

nice caption. Thank you for sharing.

Sotto Poet

August 29, 2021 at 8:01 AM

Thanks for your kind words, Kathy. I appreciate it.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

August 28, 2021 at 1:08 PM

I enjoyed the lovely water and moon images, Lasaad. ;)

Sotto Poet

August 28, 2021 at 1:48 PM

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for your kindness. Have a great weekend.

David Kavanagh

August 28, 2021 at 12:48 PM

What a wonderful picture of nature you portray here Lasaad, imperceptible to us, yet the moons gravitational force on the ocean is massive, we just have to go with the flow of your lullaby for we are powerless to do otherwise, cheers David

Sotto Poet

August 28, 2021 at 2:02 PM

Thank you very much. David, Your feedback is really encouraging to me and means a lot to me. Your generosity knows no bounds, and I sincerely appreciate it. I wish you a wonderful weekend.