A Lull Premiere Contest Winner

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I lay me down in the land of a languorous lull, A leisurely liaison laxing amidst the silenced still… No weeping words wander upon the constructive canvas. The day mourns the nebulous neglected nestled night, Where the shadows sustain the seductive sorrows… Condolences for a candlelight as it flickers to foreordination. Where empty echoes escape through voiceless vapors, A quiet quiescence quivers as it lies to its rendering riotous rest… And a calamitous calm causes a chaotic caliginous collective. A suspended soothe within the overlords of obstinate oblivions, As tranquilized time is transported to a pensive purgatory prison… I prepare for the heavens and hells that await my misled muse. ...there has been an anomaly in the space-time continuum...my muse has reached a lull...perhaps this verse will give it spark to ignite it to Super-Nova status lol... Feb.12.2020 Pick-A-Title, Vol 14 - Tristich Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Date: 5/18/2020 2:04:00 PM
Hello W.W. A very deep beautiful poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/14/2020 10:33:00 AM
Congrats on your #1 trophy win, WW--so well done.
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Date: 3/14/2020 9:20:00 AM
Thank you all dear friends, for your lovely comments...not feeling the greatest these days...all my love...the Wingster...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 3/13/2020 8:38:00 PM
Wings, with lulls like that, who needs a muse, lol! You are the master of this domain. A transcendently, terrific tristich, my talented titan of terminology! Congrats on a very impressive #1 finish ~ John
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Date: 3/13/2020 6:49:00 PM
Bro bro, even though your muse is in ‘lull mode’, you’d never know it with this expressive and impressive poem. A super-nova beauty! Congratulations on your wonderful trophy win, big bro. You make your lil sissy proud! Lotsa love.. ~Illum <3
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/13/2020 8:19:00 PM
Yes, Edward, I’m proud to say that WW, AKA bro bro, is part of my ‘virtual family’ along with our sis, Brenda Chiri, AKA Dragon Fire. And they are most definitely a pair of talented sibs :)) They make me so proud!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/13/2020 7:12:00 PM
Wait, WW is your brother? Wow, I can't believe I'm finding out just now! Talent sure runs in your family:-)
Date: 3/13/2020 6:44:00 PM
What a stunning write, WW:-) One of the finest alliteration poems I've read in a long time. Congratulations on your trophy win!
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Date: 2/16/2020 2:27:00 PM
Even in your lull of the lowest lull's you will always be a Super-Nova my friend. Always a pleasure to read your poetry and to learn new words as well (lol) Hope all is well bro. ~CM
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Date: 2/15/2020 8:27:00 AM
You really love your alliteration like a kid loves candy...Great use of vocabulary as always .
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Date: 2/14/2020 7:55:00 AM
WoW! WW, This is such a well written composed write. Good content and alliterations. Writer’s block? I don’t think so. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.Have a wonderful day. Happy Valentines Day bro:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/13/2020 11:40:00 AM
A stupendous write, Wingster. Such a talent, you are! A poetic phenomenon, indeed Panagiota xx
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Date: 2/13/2020 2:55:00 AM
Enjoy your languorous lull, the block will be broken by life itself, sooner than later...All the best WW
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Date: 2/12/2020 2:09:00 PM
... if I could lull you into a sense of encouragement ... lovely written, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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