A Loving Reply To Soup Mail From Sharon

Two leaves fell from a different tree
And the loss of the world was all the same
There is beauty in all diversity
Difference of temperature changes not the flame
The sun that comes down a barren sky
Prowl and prospect among all leaves alike, he
Don Juan, on green leaves lovers of lie
Bringers of semens of light, we yield in glee.

We have not fallen yet, my dear, unless
Our love shall wither up our root
Race is nothing but the skin of superficialness
Let us meausre all merit by truth
I transform light to sugar as much as you
And pull deep waters up to give again
More than oxygen, more than bosom for the dew
We are the maker and licker of rain.

Palmate or pinnate it does not matter now
You are sharon like the rose, and I
Thorn or petal am still apart of the bough
One storm, one season brittle and dry
And we shall lie together like mulch where
Yesterday our tongues were tied in
Words, moaning on the happy, happy air
Chlorophyl sweet desire stirring the skin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/17/2009 4:01:00 PM
I'm totally jealous ... LOL ... another awesome outpouring from you L'nass!! and one I have no doubt Ms. Sharon will treasure ...
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Date: 3/17/2009 5:10:00 AM
truth be told by you...:) wonderful
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Date: 3/17/2009 4:03:00 AM
Another awesome piece from you.. your writing drips with so much imagery and takes the reader down avenues never before seen. Love the mastery which your words holds the attention of the reader until you decide its time for them to go. Respect.
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Date: 3/17/2009 2:30:00 AM
Beautiful!!!! You have written truth here, L'nass. Sharon like the rose, indeed. one of my most favorite people, you have given her much to ponder here, I'm sure of it. :) Excellent, as always, love, Kristin
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Date: 3/16/2009 11:31:00 PM
wonderfully expressed your gratefulness... in this write! and thank you for your lovely thoughts on my write... i didn't realise until your wrote that its like a bird... ~ Arany
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Date: 3/16/2009 9:35:00 PM
Wow, this is beautiful. I don't know what that mail was all about but, Wow! Great writing flowing off the page like a fountain. Smiles from Lolita
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