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A love's fading flame

In the beginning, a tale so sweet, A love blossomed, oh, what a treat. He painted dreams, of us together, Promises made, to last forever. His words, they wove a golden thread, In his embrace, I found solace, not dread. But as time passed, his touch grew cold, His love, once fiery, now timid and old. I chased his love, like a fleeting dream, But in his eyes, no love did gleam. He held me close, yet kept me at bay, His silence spoke, of love's decay. A friend he became, in times of need, Embracing my heart, with care and heed. Yet beneath the surface, a truth did lie, His love, a mirage, bidding goodbye. Now tired of chasing, love's fading flame, I sense the embers, whispering my name. For in his silence, I find my release, To let go of love, and find my peace. By: Innantia Magcanya

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Date: 3/26/2024 3:54:00 PM
Sad breakup poetry. Glad you are here at PS Innantia
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Innantia Magcanya
Date: 3/26/2024 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Tom!
Date: 3/26/2024 3:53:00 PM
Dear Reader, "Love's Fading Flame" delves into the heartfelt journey of a woman who once felt like a queen in her lover's arms, only to find herself chasing elusive dreams. This poem captures the poignant essence of love's changing dynamics as she navigates through the highs and lows of romance. Share your own thoughts and reflections on the complexities of love, Your insights are valued as we explore together the themes of longing, disappointment, and ultimately, finding love. Innantia
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