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A Lovers Note

Gentle waves rolled in so white and fluffy from a sea so blue it made me feel happy I paddled bare feet in it's warm white foam all of my thoughts so far from home when all at once I saw bobbing there in the waves a message in a bottle- was someone hoping to be saved? I opened up its rusty lid- a lovers note which said- 'I love you so with all my heart-why did we ever have to part'? I wondered for whom this note was meant and, from whose heart it had been sent I stood and pondered for a while-then sent it back to sea you see I know this lovers note was meant for someone but that someone was not me.

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Date: 2/6/2020 7:54:00 AM
Aww!! This is simply superb!!!
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Julie Achilles
Date: 2/7/2020 4:41:00 AM
Thanks Swetha, Regards, Julie

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