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A Loved One

The graveside seems hauntingly silent Only two ravens sit on a stone cross the stillness of night leaves them compliant not even pecking at the monument's moss The stones are set to remember someone who was probably, at one time, a loved one September 27, 2019 Image # 2 Make IT Six Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 10/4/2019 1:41:00 PM
Silent...compliant (ravens): Nicely rhymed and messaged, Regina! Congrats on your placement in the contest. Blessings, Gershon
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/4/2019 9:25:00 PM
Thank you tons, Gershon. I appreciate you. Bless you
Date: 10/3/2019 7:49:00 PM
"A haunting silence" in memory of a loved one...Congrats on your win Regina
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 10/4/2019 9:25:00 PM
Thank you so much. Bless you always
Date: 9/28/2019 2:25:00 AM
Grave sites are creepy to me. I am insisting on not having one.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 9/28/2019 5:45:00 AM
They are creepy in one way, but are a place of honor in a way too... just wait til the dead in Christ rise... Bless you
Date: 9/27/2019 7:22:00 PM
Grave sites say so much in their sombre silence. Well done Regina
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 9/28/2019 5:44:00 AM
Thanks and bless you
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