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A Love That Is True

am I made of glass or not I see no reflection am I solid like the rose do I know reflection does my scent cling onto him each time I disappear does my spirit shine like the star's aglow reflection what avenue should I take to get to his garden nook what cupid will join me and my fellow reflection will I be pleasing or brave enough to win his heart will I espy the glass and see his show reflection am I made of glass or not this remains to be seen am I the cognate of his chamber's window reflection forfeit not love for sake of lust, mirror on the wall forfeit me not when I abide in Joe's reflection transparent as pixie dust, but I'm not made of glass transparent as moonlight yes, in my beaus reflection. September 1, 2020

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Date: 2/6/2024 2:52:00 AM
Great ghazal one nice you followed the rhyme before the refrain rule, well done!
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Date: 2/6/2024 3:31:00 AM
thank you Terry
Date: 11/18/2020 2:50:00 AM
nice
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Date: 10/19/2020 5:42:00 AM
forfeit not love for sake of lust - Nice !!
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Date: 10/3/2020 6:24:00 AM
Gentle and sweet penning PD. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/3/2020 6:17:00 PM
Thank you for reading Linda.
Date: 10/3/2020 5:09:00 AM
Seems like a love that is true, a great attempt at the ghazal.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/3/2020 6:17:00 PM
Thank you for the honor Silent One.
Date: 9/16/2020 11:55:00 AM
lovely write - such a beautiful last line
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Date: 9/9/2020 5:56:00 AM
Hello Pixie Dust, this is so romantic. Congratulations on your win. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 9/3/2020 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" I love you title. Enjoy your win and your day.......................
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Date: 9/2/2020 5:19:00 AM
- Yes, your spirit glows ... that is true - a beautiful poem, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/1/2020 3:18:00 PM
Enjoyed this dialogue on love --lovely reflective write, Vienna.
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