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A Love Story

I loved
She laughed
I cried
She mocked my advances
I lowered my head in shame
She walked out of my life forever
I died

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Funom Makama

April 4, 2015 at 6:59 AM

Absolutely wonderful! Its a blessed and wonderful weekend for me, chilling out with poetic lines so fine and touching

Arthur Vaso

April 6, 2015 at 9:47 PM

Thank you so much Funom

Kp Nunez

March 28, 2015 at 1:27 PM

If not for the pic, I would have cried too...thank you for including it then. Another 7. Such incredible talent. Why are you not posting lately? Happy to see your avatar today, though. :)

Arthur Vaso

April 6, 2015 at 9:47 PM

I am a clown even in death!

Kelly Deschler

March 26, 2015 at 10:34 PM

The death of the heart. I know what that feels like, but I am still hangin' on and tomorrow is a new day... Great expression in so few lines. Nice work, Arthur!

Arthur Vaso

April 6, 2015 at 9:46 PM

Well if you ever wanna meet a dead man, gimme a ring!

Maurice Yvonne

March 23, 2015 at 6:39 PM

I think you figured out that picture dead on. As dark as is this write I have to admit the wheels of your mind turning gave me a chuckle as well as made my spine tingle!

Arthur Vaso

April 6, 2015 at 9:46 PM

Sometimes I think I am driving with a flat tire!! :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

March 17, 2015 at 1:05 AM

Wow the picture is worth a thousand words! The kind of pain too many can understand, but a person like the one you describe, she doesn't seem worth it...hugs, Rhonda

Arthur Vaso

April 6, 2015 at 9:45 PM

Thanks Rhonda!!! :)

Constance La France

March 16, 2015 at 3:48 PM

Arthur this is deep stuff and that photo is so dark and chilling but I like the poem and thanks for your comment on my poetry

Arthur Vaso

March 16, 2015 at 8:25 PM

Thank you too Broken Wings!

Liam Mcdaid

March 16, 2015 at 9:50 AM

oh i know that very feeling were they hold your hands laugh and make promises to your family then cast you to the darkness beautifully crafted dear pal excellent lov e story bless you in your heart of love arthur wishing you a blessed beautiful st patricks day

Arthur Vaso

March 16, 2015 at 8:24 PM

Thank you liam, cheers!

Casarah Nance

March 16, 2015 at 7:25 AM

ahh such your style, nicely done. hugsxx

Arthur Vaso

March 16, 2015 at 8:24 PM

Thank you Cas, nice to hear from someone who has such style!!!

Dorian Petersen Potter

March 15, 2015 at 11:36 PM

Very nice pen Arthur! That's one hell of a love story gone very bad you've paint us here, my dear friend. That very dramatic picture enhance it to. Very sad poem! Really sorry about it since is not fictional. A 7 from me. Wishing you a lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.

Arthur Vaso

March 15, 2015 at 11:38 PM

Thank you kindly Dorian!

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