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A Love Song For the Universe

A love song for the universe
(If all would sing) could travel high,
Its notes of harmony traverse
the paths of stars beyond the sky!

And if all "feeling" souls could hear
A love song for the universe,
There'd be an end to hate and fear,
So join and sing this simple verse. . .

Whose strains sung strongly could immerse
All worlds in peace, sweet melody,
A love song for the universe.
Why can't it be sung easily?

And with eternal hope will cling
All spirits who need not rehearse
What all of us so need to sing,
A love song for the universe!

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Bl Devnath Date: 5/4/2016 9:55:00 AM Congratulation on your beautiful win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 5/3/2016 8:01:00 PM Congratulations Andrea on the placement of the contest Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 5/3/2016 4:25:00 PM Andrea, congrats on your placement this is one of my faves, just sayin..:)-luloo Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 6/11/2012 1:43:00 AM Andrea congrats on your great win...David Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 6/8/2012 6:41:00 PM Congrats, Andrea. Awesome. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph Login to Reply

Painted Hunter Date: 6/8/2012 12:01:00 PM I'll sing along! nice piece! Congrats on the placement...Caleb Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/8/2012 11:51:00 AM Congratulations on your Inspiration poem win Andrea. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 6/8/2012 6:36:00 AM Congratulations Andy what a lovely thought a Love song for the universe xx Login to Reply

Diane Christian Date: 6/8/2012 4:57:00 AM congratualtions and thanks for supporting my contest God bless from diane Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 10/16/2010 10:12:00 AM I would gladly sing a love song for the universe. Not much of a singing voice but I do like to sing. God Bless phyl Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 9/10/2010 3:44:00 PM lovely song, Andrea! Enjoyed much the read this late evening! And thank you so much for your ongoing kind comments on my poems! All the best and have a great weekend!..Love, gert Login to Reply

Kristi Hayner Date: 9/9/2010 5:49:00 AM Love your love song, Andrea, thank for writing, why can't it be sung easily??? It was Capitalism and if you do watch, be ready to be disturbed in the aftermath....... Login to Reply

Carol Fillmore Date: 9/9/2010 5:25:00 AM this is pretty wonderful!!! excellent job Andrea:) Thanks for your comment on my recent post, Andrea, much appreciated! It was something written awhile ago than I just found in a folder in my documents. It required tlc before it was ready to post here though:) Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 9/9/2010 4:18:00 AM enjoyed reading today. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/8/2010 9:14:00 PM What a lovely entry for the contest Andrea, and wouldn't it be wonderful for everyone to join in this song. I admire your seeming ease at creating in different forms. This is sure to do well. Mahalo, Connie Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/8/2010 6:45:00 PM No rain Andrea but the winds are very fierce tonight and a good night to cuddle with a movie or poetry luv... or someone special..haha.. we don't expect any rain this week and are on a fire hazard alert due to the dryness of everything..luv.. Login to Reply

David Smalling Date: 9/8/2010 12:49:00 PM But all will not sing though all may read, and keep the love song in their heart. Beautiful, my friend Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/8/2010 12:41:00 PM Well definitely reads like a top winner to me Andrea.. perfect lines and thought patterns... enjoyed and good luck.. this one is a very precious piece my friend..luv.. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/8/2010 12:32:00 PM Nice and very wonderous, Andrea! Hi and how are you, good and tired i bet.. what a long weekend. Good luck in the contest,..p.d. Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 9/8/2010 8:27:00 AM Try the last movement of Beethoven's Ninth Symphony. I think this is what he had in mind. Good write. LOve, Dave Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/8/2010 4:39:00 AM A lyrical piece for the contest Andrea, we should all embrace the idea of singing a love song for the universe.. just imagine the harmony.. Best wishes for the contest, love Wilma Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/8/2010 3:51:00 AM Good luck in the contest with this well written poem that reads like a winner..All things are singing praise to their creator we just can't hear it ...We can only hear a small portion of it..I am glad that you enjoyed reading my work and hope that you gained a new or different insight from something that I penned..Sara Login to Reply

Hyle Chu Date: 9/7/2010 11:31:00 PM Hey, i'm listening to this instrumental while reading your poem. Tears Of Joy by Orchestra Lunatica. "All spirits who need not rehearse" I like that line. The song is within us all, huh. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 9/7/2010 10:55:00 PM I just love the thought of that, "love song for the universe" hopefully the message you write here would be heard-- sure would make a difference if people actually followed your advice-- very nice thoughts you put in here Andrea :) this better be in the winner's list & no worries I am definitely not removing it hahaha I just got so excited that it was almost filled up haha I am actually the culprit why it closed lol ;) but hmmm will see if I can still revise it...if not sorry ..hugs Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/7/2010 10:46:00 PM Andrea, I wish that love song would emerge from our hearts, filled with peace and love for other creatures throughout the universe. A very creative take on the contest, my friend, and you'll excel in the contest with this imaginative entry. As for the age-hider, we know her well. 'Nuff said. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

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