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A Love Poem's Goodbye

I shall miss the poetry hiding in your smile, or the way your hand fit once, inside of mine. In bitterness my heart turns against me, longing to feel again the beat of yours; one, two, in time. A summer romance as they all say, it seems never stand the test of time no matter the hopes we place. I am forever in debt to the wonder and love you shared with me those summer nights. The agony, in hopes, will pass, but, with tenderness will I look upon the memories we have here shared. I shall miss the beauty of your eyes, and the wonder of your kiss. Those nights under the stars; goodbye, my love, goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/28/2010 5:34:00 AM
brava ... beautiful ... going to my favourite poets ... love Jayne
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:24:00 AM
captured the essense of loss love beautifully
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Date: 9/27/2010 2:19:00 PM
This is one of my faves of your work. Maybe because it triggers my heart in a way. I can relate to this.. Having your heart broken is one of the worsts pains you can face in life besides being beaten by your own blood..in my opinion. I gave this a 7.. im new to poetry soup so i hope that is the highest rating because this poem deserves it.
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Date: 9/27/2010 10:35:00 AM
A WONDERFUL POEM TO READ! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
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