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A Love Poem About Hate

This latest poem is all about hate Like I hate to say goodbye Or I hate the fact I'm not with you Every moment, you and I I hate it when other men look at you Hate to have to share you at all Like locking you up in a dark room In a castle with ten foot walls Think I'm greedy well maybe I am Hate to admit it but it's true Want you all to myself all the time On my mind all day through Hate it when other guys look at you You're mine and all mine alone Go ogle some other guy's woman My hatred is very well known

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Date: 2/21/2023 11:23:00 PM
The kindest hate poem I ever read :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/22/2023 4:03:00 AM
LOL Much appreciated my friend! XOX
Date: 2/21/2023 6:28:00 PM
Your mine…all mine… Go ogle some other guy's woman…lol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/22/2023 4:04:00 AM
Got a kick out of your comment dear Kim! Yee Haw! XOX
Date: 2/21/2023 4:29:00 PM
My dad used to say he liked a woman it took two trips to hug.Guess he liked the big girls.Yeah, there is somebody for everyone I guess.Jack look at it this way those other guys looking are just proof of your good taste.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/22/2023 4:06:00 AM
Right on dear Vickey... living proof! LOL Have a great day XOX
Date: 2/21/2023 6:02:00 AM
Extra possessive, aren’t we? Enjoyed the poetic outburst, message understood :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/21/2023 6:09:00 AM
LOL So you got the message! An outburst it was! Cheers, Jacko!
Date: 2/21/2023 4:44:00 AM
This one reminds me of an old funny song I once heard, Jack. It starts out "I don't want her, you can have her, she's too fat for me" LOL I enjoyed reading you this morning. Hoping you are well my friend:)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/21/2023 5:14:00 AM
Remember it well guess we go back to the same era eh! "She's too fat for for me" LOL Hey Daniel, have a good week ahead! Cheers my good friend!!!!

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